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Yes.
The big no-no is to write that the man pick up the wallet and returned it without hesitation. He can choose to return it eventually (for example, after some emotional struggle/dilemma) but the initial intention to take it for himself ought to be mentioned.
oh noo ... i wrote that both students and the boy were helping leh :// but my 6th picture was that he was late for tuition but he didn’t regret as he helped someone. how many marks would be deducted for 离题 ?
I think that the story u wrote is accepted, bcos they never give u a topic to write about and at pic 6, u can write anything u want. So long as u write correctly from pic 1 to 5 should be okay

and u can write anything u want at the 6 pic because they just gave u the “?” Sign and it is for u to end the story by urself.[/quote]yea but i thought the smile on the boys face was about a good deed . based on what chenlaoshi wrote , it seems like i did 离题 as in my story , the boy helped the grandmother and returned with no hesitation ..