2010 PSLE English

[Almighty]

I normally do Compo's very well and so had been asked by my teachers to type in my compo which i wrote for my PSLE. Thought it might be useful for those who will be writing PSLE in future and so, i'm sharing my compo on the old lady walking towards the bus stop ..Please feel free to comment...


The school bell resonated through the lifeless hallways of my school. Students sat ram-rod straight, their stare boring holes onto the teacher. As soon as they received the cue, students dashed towards the school gate. I chattered incessantly with my friends as I made my way towards the bus stop, though I could hardly hear myself over the din created by the students. We sat heavily on the benches as we reached the bus-stop.
Just then, an old lady caught my eyes. Old age had reduced her movement to a painful hobble. My heartstrings pulled to see her edge her way towards the bus-stop at a snail’s pace. Instinctively, I shot up from my seat to give it up to the elderly lady…
Suddenly, the elderly lady shot past me and snatched a well-dressed lady’s handbag with brute force before making her gateway. I was baffled. ‘How could the elderly woman run so fast? Why did she pretend to hobble on her walking stick when she could run at lightning speed? Why did she steal the lady’s handbag…?”. Questions swirled in my mind. The expression on the faces of the people around me depicted that they were stupefied as me. The victim’s jaws began to drop as reality sank in. Instantaneously, a scream escaped the victim’s mouth.
Seconds later, I recalled a brainwave of a radio host announcing that a convict was on the loose. Being a master of disguises, the convict could disguise as practically anyone. It suddenly dawned upon me that the elderly woman was actually the escaped convict and had disguised as an elderly lady to avoid recognition. With no time to lose, I fished out my phone and dialed the police hotline.
Meantime, two public spirited men gave chase to the convict. Realizing that he was being trailed, the escaped convict let out an agitated roar as his speed took a sharp incline. However, the men were hot on the convict’s trail. The unmistakable wail of the police cars shattered the serenity of the placate afternoon. Police men trouped out of the cars and surrounded the convict. The convict was in hot soup. Realizing that escape was beyond his reach, he surrendered. The crowd cheered as the convict was hauled into the police cars. The handbag was promptly returned to the well-dressed lady. The two men were regarded as heroes. That was another villain put behind bars. From that incident, I realized never to judge a book by its covers.

[JieTing]

Almighty:

I normally do Compo's very well and so had been asked by my teachers to type in my compo which i wrote for my PSLE. Thought it might be useful for those who will be writing PSLE in future and so, i'm sharing my compo on the old lady walking towards the bus stop ..Please feel free to comment...


The school bell resonated through the lifeless hallways of my school. Students sat ram-rod straight, their stare boring holes onto the teacher. As soon as they received the cue, students dashed towards the school gate. I chattered incessantly with my friends as I made my way towards the bus stop, though I could hardly hear myself over the din created by the students. We sat heavily on the benches as we reached the bus-stop.
Just then, an old lady caught my eyes. Old age had reduced her movement to a painful hobble. My heartstrings pulled to see her edge her way towards the bus-stop at a snail’s pace. Instinctively, I shot up from
my seat to give it up to the elderly lady…
Suddenly, the elderly lady shot past me and snatched a well-dressed lady’s handbag with brute force before making her gateway. I was baffled. ‘How could the elderly woman run so fast? Why did she pretend to hobble on her walking stick when she could run at lightning speed? Why did she steal the lady’s handbag…?”. Questions swirled in my mind. The expression on the faces of the people around me depicted that they were stupefied as me. The victim’s jaws began to drop as reality sank in. Instantaneously, a scream escaped the victim’s mouth.
Seconds later, I recalled a brainwave of a radio host announcing that a convict was on the loose. Being a master of disguises, the convict could disguise as practically anyone. It suddenly dawned upon me that the elderly woman was actually the escaped convict and had disguised as an elderly lady to avoid recognition. With no time to lose, I fished out my phone and dialed the police hotline.
Meantime, two public spirited men gave chase to the convict. Realizing that he was being trailed, the escaped convict let out an agitated roar as his speed took a sharp incline. However, the men were hot on the convict’s trail. The unmistakable wail of the police cars shattered the serenity of the placate afternoon. Police men trouped out of the cars and surrounded the convict. The convict was in hot soup. Realizing that escape was beyond his reach, he surrendered. The crowd cheered as the convict was hauled into the police cars. The handbag was promptly returned to the well-dressed lady. The two men were regarded as heroes. That was another villain put behind bars. From that incident, I realized never to judge a book by its covers.

Wow, enjoy reading your compo. I beleive you should be able to score high mark Dont worry, just relax and enjoy free time.

21 Days to go!!! :celebrate:

[Almighty]

JieTing:

Almighty:

Wow, enjoy reading your compo. I beleive you should be able to score high mark Dont worry, just relax and enjoy free time.


21 Days to go!!! :celebrate:

:thankyou:

[Mathmaniac]

Almighty:

JieTing:

[quote=\"Almighty\"]Wow, enjoy reading your compo. I beleive you should be able to score high mark Dont worry, just relax and enjoy free time.


21 Days to go!!! :celebrate:

:thankyou:

[/quote]Excellent piece of essay for psle standard!

[Almighty]

Mathmaniac:

Excellent piece of essay for psle standard!

:thankyou: Mathmaniac.

[Brenda10]

Hi Almighty



This is a very well written compo. and appreciate if you could kindly share a few more.

Thank you and have a nice day. :lol:

[MOE Hater]

Hi Almighty,


I thought that one of the pointers was what did your friends do but that's not mentioned in your compo.

That aside, I think it is quite well written.

Cheers :celebrate:

[Almighty]

Brenda10:

Hi Almighty



This is a very well written compo. and appreciate if you could kindly share a few more.

Thank you and have a nice day. :lol:

Hi Brenda 10,

Thankyou for your comment.

Sorry to reply late.Went 2 home town to celebrate Diwali..Dint c Kiasu Forum.
All my P6 compos r with my Form teacher.If she gives back 2 me i will definetly scan n give links of my best compos...No problem in that.

[Almighty]

MOE Hater:

Hi Almighty,


I thought that one of the pointers was what did your friends do but that's not mentioned in your compo.

That aside, I think it is quite well written.

Cheers :celebrate:

Hi MOE Hater,

Thanks for your comment.
I did mention abt the people in the bus stop in general (Which includes my friends).I also think tht i had used 1 sentence abt my friends.Dont exactly remember it.Moreover, they are just hints for us to develop our compo n i think its not necessary tht v should make use of all of them...Pls. correct me if i am wrong..